The Perfect Town: Chapter 1
Hi again. So I was thinking about writing a story, just for the sake of this blog. Hope you enjoy!
The Perfect Town
Chapter 1
Dove Danvers from Shadyside Town loved her school. She loved her entire town. She had a perfect life. Until Doris Parks came along.
Dove was just about to walk into Shadyside Middle School one Thursday morning when she heard a voice behind her.
"So this dump is going to be my new school?"
Dove stopped. Then she turned around. A girl, about a foot taller than her, was looking around at the outside of Shadyside Middle, leaning on a flagpole.
Fury raged through Dove. Her school was the best. There was not one problem about it. And nobody could change that.
"Well, I think that this dump happens to be the world's most awesome middle school," Dove said, craning her head upward to have eye contact with the new girl.
The girl looked down at Dove. "And who might you be?"
Dove glared up. "Dove Danvers. Shadyside seventh grader. What's it to you?"
The girl just smiled and walked into the school, Dove fuming from behind.
That afternoon as Dove opened up her locker to store away her history books, she heard a voice behind her. But this one was different. Once again, she turned around to see none other than Dove's very best friend, Valerie.
"Oh, it's you. Hey Val."
"Yeah, 'Course it's me. Who'd you think?"
"I thought it was that rude girl from today morning. The one I told you about during lunch?"
"Oh her. Yeah. By the way, did you see the new detention teacher? Victor McGalley managed to take a picture of her when he was in detention today. He posted the pic on ShadyGlam," Valerie said, scrolling through her phone, "Here!"
Valerie held her phone up, and Dove gasped.
Author's note: So I'll be publishing every chapter in a separate post, so I'll have time to write, instead of posting it all at once. So who do you think it is? You might be a little surprised. Stay tuned for the next chapter!
Maybe the Doris Parks girl, but I dunno. Nice though. I like your writing style! Good job.
ReplyDeleteCheck the second chapter that I just added if you didn't see it yet.
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